Quotations introduction.
“I am tired of being poor, this is humiliating.” A young girl emotionally said to myself. A young girl said to herself. She never asked for this poverty fate. She was born in a poor family. She couldnot own anything that other teens have. I am that young girl. This poverty stopped many people from achieve their dreams. Apart from that, many from their kind doesnot know that they can seek help to improve their life. This poverty can be improve by government giving help through their children’s education, economy welfare and motivation as a self-improvement.
CONTRAST TO THE THESIS STATEMENT
Since the back of thousands years ago, alcohol has been famous and promoted in human lives. In chemistry, alcohol has been used for many things such as to produce ethanol and methanol which are commonly use in medication. Ethanol is used to treat methanol poisoning by reducing the rate of which methanol is metabolised. Research in the last few years found that there are a lot of advantages of alcohol such as the source of energy in the diet and can release our stress.However,nowadays alcohol leads to many harmful drawbacks. Thus, the disadvantages of alcohol can cause liver’s damage, poor judgement , and effect of our brain.
Current events (Social)
In 2007, the Star newspaper reported that an IPTS student in Segamat has dumped a baby in a plastic bag into a big drain. The baby which his umbilical cord is still intact was found by a good Samaritan. Two years later, Malaysia was shocked again by the same news: A fisherman had accidently fished a black plastic bag which he taught it was an ordinary plastic bag that had been littered by the irresponsible persons. He then opened the plastic bag out of curiosity and then was horrified for what he saw. A decayed baby!. These news proved that the statistics of social problems are increasing up until now. Thus, to ace these social problems, one should have a strong moral value, parents should play their roles effectively and one should use media wisely.
- RED=THESIS STATEMENT
- BLUE=THE TRANSITION
- GREEN=THE HOOK
*Here are some example for type of hooks.Types of hooks have a 7 type..My group do the current event.I think,I need to be careful when do the introductory of paragraph because sometimes,we are careless.We need to make sure that the transition have a relate with thesis statement.I think,I have a problem to do the transition like Miss Zu says..
